Like any other day, walking down the lane
Something I saw which made my heartbeat to soar
Refreshing like the crimsoned sunlight in the morning
I thought I saw the perfect girl next door.
Feet stuck to the ground, eyes admiring her aura
Nobody could even long for more
Still confused between dream and reality
I was mesmerised by the girl next door.
I started thinking about her night and day
She was beautiful from both surface and the core
I had always mocked the committed emotional fools
Now I fell in love with the girl next door.
The world suddenly started to seem awesome
The Romeo inside me started to roar.
I knew the purpose of my birth on this planet
I was born for the girl next door.
Meetings increased and we started to know each other more
She was the masterpiece of God I could swore
An epic love story was in the way of making
Of me with my girl next door.
Her presence in MY world made it a better place
But the future had something else in store.
She met with a dreadful accident on the way to meet me
Now in coma is my girl next door.
I had made grievous mistakes in the past
But is this the way the devils settle score?
That was the day I felt helpless
I prayed, I cried for my girl next door.
Everyday I wish I could change places with her
And she comes alive breaking her everlasting snore
Holding her hands but still missing her smile
I will wait Forever for my girl next door!!!
very touching.........
ReplyDeletevery emotional.........
words r 2 appealing
falling short of words...... bt itz jst d best!!!!!!!!
yes it was the best..ohh...the girl next door...ka to comment aa hi chuka hai
ReplyDeleteu know....simplicity in your words...is the best part..good going mate..:)
ReplyDeleten when u say "the Romeo inside me started to roar"..u understand what i mean!!
good effort:)
ur simplicity and the treatment of the themes in ur poems make u an avant garde.ur poem,earnest and beautiful truly depicts the deep anguish of the lover
ReplyDeletefinally u uploaded dis.....as i said earlier AWSUM.i luv d way u rhyme words..so beautiful!!!
ReplyDeletewaitin 4 ur nxt upload mr keats.
Beautiful treatment of the idea... The darkness that you have created towards the end... through all the eight stages.... meeting, getting mesmerized, falling in love, the anguish and the resolve to wait... has all the makings of a classic!!
ReplyDeletegood one bro.....
ReplyDeletejust a masterpiece....
awesomeeeee......